NovelTalk Article - Brief Word on Synopses

Brief Word on Synopses

Once a brief idea has been fleshed out into a story set in a specific place and peopled by specific, three-dimensional characters, the writer must actually lay out the novel. A practical way to do so is through the synopsis.

A synopsis is simply an overview of the story in which the writer tells (versus shows) what happens, and to whom. Basically, the writer answers: who, what, when, where, and why.

In a synopsis, focus on the characters, conflicts (both internal and external), and the sequencing of events.

A strong suggestion: begin at the beginning of the novel and let events unfold here as they do in the novel through to the novel’s end. Let the synopsis reflect the style and tone of the book. And forget cute antics, such as "If you want to know how this ends, request the manuscript." That is insulting to the editor, and exhibits a lack of professionalism no writer should willingly project.

A selling synopsis, like a selling book, contains specific elements the editor looks for:

A strong opening hook, emotional involvement
Admirable characters who experience growth as a direct result of their novel experiences
Logical conflict strong enough to sustain the novel through its length.

Shortchange or exclude any one of these elements and the representation of your work is handicapped.

Picture your synopsis as a rectangular table. Each element is a table leg and the novel is the tabletop. If any leg is weak, too short or too long, you’ve got a wobbly table that tips or collapses and the story folds. Balance is the key.

What is balance? That depends on the type of novel you’re writing. If it is a mystery, then the focus of the synopsis is on the mystery and that element bears most of the weight. If it’s a romance, then the developing relationship between the hero and heroine is the focus.

Use twenty-pound, white, non-erasable paper.
Set margins for 1 to 1-1/2 inches all around.
Type the first page header one inch from the top of the page at the left margin:

Name

Address

Phone

Opposite that, at the right margin, type:

Title of the work

Type/genre (i.e., Contemporary Romance)

Approximate word count

Drop down four-inches from the top of the page, center, then type in all caps the title of the work. Double-space twice and then begin typing your text. Text is double-spaced and written in present tense.

On the second (and on each subsequent) page, an inch from the top of the page, use a slug line or header. At the left margin: the title. At the right margin, your last name (legal name, even if writing the work using a pseudonym), a hyphen, and the page number (i.e., Hinze-1.) Double-space twice, and then continue with your text.

How long should a synopsis be? A rule of thumb is one page per 10,000 words of story. But if you’re smart, you’ll find out the targeted editor’s preference. If the editor hates long synopses and yours is twenty pages, you’re asking for trouble. If you don’t know the targeted editor’s preference, and guidelines aren’t available from the publisher, ask your writing peers. If all else fails, contact the publisher’s editorial assistant for specifics.

Formatting is a simple thing, true, but if it isn’t done properly, editors notice. Why? Exposure. If you reviewed a hundred synopses each and every month and one came across your desk that looked different, wouldn’t you notice? Of course, you would. You want your work to stand out, but because it’s great work, not because it looks different.

Now that the formatting is set, begin telling your story. In the manuscript, you show, but in the synopsis you tell, though you do so in present tense. That’s important, which is why I’m repeating it.

Make sure the opening line has a strong hook that grabs attention. State the story conflict in clear, concise terms. Remember that the conflict should be internal and external, and that without conflict and character goals that are logical, believable, well motivated, and admirable, you have no story.

Start at the beginning of the novel and work straight through to the end. Do not leave out character motivation or development, setting, or time frame. Interweave the elements so that none stand alone. So that it takes all of the story legs to make a complete story table.

Remember, no tricks or gimmicks are welcome here. No including tea bags or "tokens" or fancy wrappers. All of those things mark you as an amateur writer. Instead, hone your synopsis-writing skills to perfection. Polish until your story shines. Eliminate unnecessary details, side trips you’ve included only because you find them interesting. Stick to the high points, the meat of the story.

Using vivid imagery, strong verbs, and active voice pays handsome dividends. Answer all questions that evolve during the course of the synopsis and be sure that when the synopsis ends, you feel satisfied by the conclusion.

After you’ve completed the synopsis, run a check to make sure you’ve covered the book from beginning to end. That you’ve given a sense of who the main characters are and how they grow during the course of the novel due to choices they’ve made in resolving their inner and outer conflicts—all of which should be resolved by novel’s end. Are goals, motivations, conflicts, and resolutions clear and concise? Have you eliminated all unessential details?

Two sample synopsis pages follow:

Vicki Hinze                                                                                                                      Lady Justice
P.O. Box 235                                                                                                Related Book
Niceville, FL 32588                                                                                        Lady Liberty
100,000 words
Email: vickihinze@aol.com                                                                               Synopsis

Lady Justice

The story opens on a rainy, post-Hurricane Darla, August 13^th at the retired Judge Abernathy’s fishing camp about twenty miles north of Carnel Cove, Florida. The judge is on the phone with the local director of the Consortium, watching three tape clips of a biological attack on the United States and fighting panic.

The first clip is of a World Warrior (Cardel Boudreaux, French), in the Paris, France airport. Wearing a white hat with a US flag pin on its brim, he gives himself an injection and then opens a vial and pours a small amount of liquid on the bathroom floor. He steps into it, coating his shoes, sprays the floor with this substance, and then waits at the gate for his flight to Miami, Florida, where he overhears TV news broadcasts of damage reports from Hurricane Darla, which has hit Carnel Cove in the Florida panhandle. He boards the plane, and in flight, he dumps the remaining contents along the aisle and the contaminated vial into the toilet. Later, as he walks through an orange grove in Florida, he receives a cell phone call, ordering him to return to Carnel Cove. The judicial conference has been cancelled.

In a second clip, an unidentified man (Jaris Adahan, Yemen) wearing a white baseball cap with a US flag pin in its brim, stands near a luncheon buffet on a cruise ship in Mexico. He injects himself, sprays the food with the contents of a second vial, sprays the exit points of the ship—handrails and floors—dumps the vials into the ballast tanks, tosses the vials overboard, and then exits the ship. Soon, he walks across the border into Texas. Dressed as a customs inspector, he contaminates import shipments of fruit, and then later, walks through a cotton field. There, he is paged and ordered to go to Carnel Cove. The judicial conference has been cancelled.

The third clip is of an unidentified man, wearing a white golfing hat with a US flag pin in its brim. He crosses the Canadian border into the United States without incident, and then drives south to the Napa Valley in California. There, in the heart of wine country, he stops and removes tins of pate taped to his body. He does not inject himself with a protective vaccine, just opens the tins and then empties the contents in the vineyards. After emptying the last of the tins, he

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Last Updated on February 06, 2009